Making room

Increasingly (I write, listening this midnight
to the softly-soft hush of your fast-asleepness
from the next room) we two are becoming three.

Talking amongst ourselves, one of us will get up
and do something unexpected - crack a joke,
belch, do a funny dance - and increasingly

the culprit isn’t you or me. Or something we say -
a stutter or a fuss or a curse - will come
not from you or me. I link two points with a line

and then put a third point elsewhere, and pull
the line into a fat parabola, and listen to you snore,
you and our friend there, two and three -

what used to be you and me - we two
like two strangers on the back seat of a bus,
shuffling over, politely making room.

This entry was posted on Saturday, June 18th, 2005 at 8:52 AM and filed under Old stuff, Poetry. Trackbacks are closed.

8 Responses to “Making room”

  1. ambivalent said:

    Somewhat ineptly, the only word I can think of in my current post-lunch writer’s block is ‘nice!’, so I’m afraid that will have to suffice as far as this appreciative comment is concerned.And a somewhat belated (I don’t think I’ve said this earlier) congrats.

    1 Sweetie(s) given

  2. KateEvans said:

    2 Sweetie(s) given

  3. poggle said:

    That’s absolutely lovely. I trust you’re making a book of these for little aceEvans …..

    0 Sweetie(s) given

  4. menace said:

    ambi - ta.

    pog - what does he need a book for when he / she can read my blog like

    0 Sweetie(s) given

  5. poggle said:

    Sacrilege. Books …. well… books are.

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  6. ambivalent said:

    the text from a blog can easily be cut-and-pasted into a ‘text-to-speech’ program, and thus the baby can enjoy the blog long before he could read a book, which would require someone to actually take the time to read out loud.

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  7. KateEvans said:

    Well, that’s hardly likely to happen, ambi.

    Pog, not to worry - young Blogster Jr will indeed have a hard copy of this stuff, including ultrasound photos, cards from well-wishers, the calendar in which Mummy crossed off each day of torture and suffering in her countdown to the big day when she could have a drink again, etc.

    0 Sweetie(s) given

  8. poggle said:

    That’s what I like to see, Kate - proper priorities - wine and sushi - hurrah!

    0 Sweetie(s) given

  9. jimi said:

    I have been there and am now re-entering that place so that resonated with me and hence the reward of two, yes count them, two sweets.

    2 Sweetie(s) given

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